12 things in Mrs S’s / Mr K’s pocket / Sponge Bob Square Pants - Choose an interesting character, who you could use for this piece of writing.
Writing task:
To think of 12 things that are either in Mr S’s or Mr K’s pocket or Sponge Bob Square Pants
Focus: Punctuation and Sentences.
Punctuation Success:
OK: All sentences have capital letters and fullstops. Example: In Sponge Bob’s pockets there was a key.
There was also a rubber.
Good: There are a range of other punctuation eg commas, question marks etc Example In Sponge Bob’s pocket there was a telescope. Why? This is so he could see where he was going.
Excellent: I can use semicolons in a list. See example below
Example - 12 things in Sponge Bob Square Pants Pocket.
In Sponge Bob’s pocket you would find: Six crusty old crabby patties, in case he gets lost under the sea; an invite to Patrick Star’s 28th birthday party in case he forgets the address; …….
In Patricks Star’s pocket you would find: A 2 year old dried up container of glue from when he needed to glue up Sponge Bobs shoes; Spongebob's Phone number for when he's bored; a sleeping hat for when he wants to sleep over at SpongeBobs house if he has a terrible nightmare; a 4 year old krabby patty burger he was saving important encageins; SpongeBobs old crusty spatual he got for his 28th birthday; a telescope covered in tomato sauce from a old krabby patty; a leash for when he goes on walk with SpongeBob SpongeBob can leah him up so he doesn't get lost; a 2 year old goofy goober ticket for SpongeBob he hasn't given him yet; a ice cream gift card SpongeBob gave him the was expired from 2 years ago that Patrick gave him 1 year ago; a goofy goober hand because he stole it from the back when he was was performing; a invitation from sandy he never went to because he was watching the goofy goober concert; squidwards phone number so he can annoy him with spongebob when they get bored.
I think I did great!
Because I have used semicolons
on all of my sentences.
