Naeshyns 12 Things in our Pocket. Punctuation

12 things in Mrs S’s / Mr K’s pocket / Sponge Bob Square Pants - Choose an interesting character, who you could use for this piece of writing.

Writing task: 

To think of 12 things that are either in Mr S’s or Mr K’s pocket or  Sponge Bob Square Pants

Focus: Punctuation and Sentences. 

Punctuation Success:

OK: All sentences have capital letters and fullstops. Example: In Sponge Bob’s pockets there was a key. 

There was also a rubber. 

Good: There are a range of other punctuation eg commas, question marks etc    Example In Sponge Bob’s pocket there was a telescope. Why? This is so he could see where he was going. 

Excellent: I can use semicolons in a list. See example below

Example - 12 things in Sponge Bob Square Pants Pocket.

In Sponge Bob’s pocket you would find: Six crusty old crabby patties, in case he gets lost under the sea; an invite to Patrick Star’s 28th birthday party in case he forgets the address; …….

In Patricks Star’s pocket you would find: A 2 year old dried up container of glue from when he needed to glue up Sponge Bobs shoes; Spongebob's Phone number for when he's bored; a sleeping hat for when he wants to sleep over at SpongeBobs house if he has a terrible nightmare; a 4 year old krabby patty burger he was saving important encageins; SpongeBobs old crusty spatual he got for his 28th birthday; a telescope covered in tomato sauce from a old krabby patty; a leash for when he goes on walk with SpongeBob SpongeBob can leah him up so he doesn't get lost; a 2 year old goofy goober ticket for SpongeBob he hasn't given him yet; a ice cream gift card SpongeBob gave him the was expired from 2 years ago that Patrick gave him 1 year ago; a goofy goober hand because he stole it from the back when he was was performing; a invitation from sandy he never went to because he was watching the goofy goober concert; squidwards phone number so he can annoy him with spongebob when they get bored.

I think I did great! 

                                                Because I have used               semicolons   

                                                on all of my sentences.